2023 武漢四月調(diào)研英語作文講評
應(yīng)用文原文
????你是學校排球隊長,即將結(jié)束在國外中學的交流訪問,你將代表球隊在答謝宴會上致辭,請準備一篇答謝辭,內(nèi)容包括
1.感謝接待;
2.你們的收獲;
3.表達祝愿。
Franklin 應(yīng)用文下水文
Ladies andgentlemen, fellow athletes and wonderful hosts,
????On behalf of our entire volleyball team, I would like to express our heartfelt gratitude for the warm and generous reception we’ve received throughout our exchange visit. Your kindness and hospitality have truly made us feel at home.
????During our time here, we’ve learned a lot about volleyball techniques and strategies, but what’s really touched our hearts are the unforgettable moments we’ve shared together- the friendly match we played under the stars, the exciting team-building exercises that bonded us like families, and the impressive culture tour that brought us closer to your heritage.
????As we say goodbye and start our journey home, we’d like to thank you once again, from the bottom of our heart. May our shared love for volleyball witness many more years of ourexchangeand growth. Until we meet again, we wish you all the best.
讀后續(xù)寫原文
“Maria and Peter lived in a coastal city. The greatest pleasure in summer for them was to swim at their local beach after school. But one day they started to lose their enthusiasm for swimming in the waters. More often than not, they would find plastic bags thrown on the beach.
Worse still, as they swam in the water, some plastic bags would float around them and even stick to their legs when they walked to the shore.
They were upset and decided something needed to be done to stop the beautiful sea becoming consumed by waste. One weekend, Maria and Peter brought a big bag to the beach and determined to clean it up. Sweat streamed down from their forehead while they bent down and picked up the plastic bags. To their disappointment, after a day’s hard work, there were still many plastic bags lying on the beach or floating in the water. Going home with aching legs and arms, Maria and Peter were almost defeated by a strong sense of failure.
That night over dinner with their parents, the pair ate silently. Noticing their low spirits, Mother asked gently, “You two looked so down. What happened?” Exchanging glances with Peter, Maria replied in a low voice, “It’s those annoying plastic bags. We tried to clean up but it was just impossible. “ Understanding the pair’s disappointment, their father patted them on the back and comforted,” Well, it’s really hard for just two of you to fix such a big problem. “
“Just two of us…” complained Maria and Peter, looking at each other. Suddenly, an idea flashed through their minds, their eyes shining with excitement. “Yes, that’s the point! We should make more people aware of the problem and encourage them to take action!” the pair said in chorus.”
段首句
Quickly finishing their dinner, the pair went upstairs and started planning.
Excited and nervous, they posted the video and article on WeChat.
Franklin 讀后續(xù)寫下水文
Quickly finishing their dinner, the pair went upstairs and started planning. Peter opened his laptop, while Maria fetched a tablet, beginning to brainstorm the best way to get their message across. Eyes sparkling with determination and purpose, they racked their brains and decided to create a documentary-style video, using drone footage and images to showcase the consequence of plastic pollution. Besides, they outlined an informative article illustrating the impact of plastic on marine life, combining sound statistics and expert opinions to support their argument. Later that night, the pair spent hours researching, writing, and filming, their fingers flying across the keyboard. As Maria spoke on camera, her voice trembled with concern, hoping their efforts would arouse people’s awareness. Having edited their video and article, they high-fived with sleepy eyes.
Excited and nervous, they posted the video and article on WeChat. When they woke up the next day, their hearts raced rapidly as they checked the public’s response. Seeing the rising number of views, shares, and comments, hardly could they contain their excitement, knowing their message struck a chord with the community. Some admitted they had been ignorant of the severity of the issue, while others related their own experiences with plastic pollution. Impressed by the Maria and Peter’s video and article, the local community group buzzed with plans for group cleanups, recycling initiatives, and plastic reduction challenges. Hearts swelling with gratitude and fulfillment, the pair exchanged a grin, aware that their compassion and devotion sparked a wave of change to their beloved sea, eagerly anticipating their return.
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