根據(jù)學(xué)生的不同基礎(chǔ)，雅思作文有不同的教授方式。

目前這個(gè)學(xué)生是高一，所以按怎么在考場上寫出6分作文的水平來教。

范文是根據(jù)我給她的句型，給她做一個(gè)示范，同一個(gè)科技大類，兩種題型的作文怎么用上句型，短時(shí)間內(nèi)捏一篇考場6分作文。

題目:

some people think the range of technology available to individuals today increase the gap between the rich and the poor, while others think that it has the opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion .

討論型作文，4段式

P1

1 People have different views about whether the use of technology increases the gap between the rich and the poor.

2While some people think it dose , ?my opinion is the opposite :NO

P2

1總 People in favour of “YES” base their ground on the fact that some technology can only be used by the rich .

2 解釋And poor people could not afford it

3 例子 For instance , only those with abundant money could explore the space by taking the advantage of technology ,while people with limited living resources even have to worry about how to feed themselves and their families.

4 遞進(jìn) Furthermore, rich people have the ability to invest cutting-edge technology to continually accumulate wealth for their empire.

5 總Due to these reasons ,people often claim that technology makes the rich richer whereas the poor poorer.

P3

1 總 However , the truth is that technology plays an essential role in the whole development of human beings including the normal people and the poor.

2 舉例For instance , the wide use of internet gains popularity amongst most people on earth , over half percent of whom are ordinary people.

3 That is why many people state that the technology narrows the gap between different social status ?for the sake of the information age.

4 Hence , the development of technology has always been the mode of innovation and creation .

P4

1 To conclude, I personally believe that technology is so powerful that the world would consists of middle class as the majority and the extreme rich or poor will be fewer and fewer .

題目

space travel has been possible for some time. Many people think that space tourism should be developed in the future. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

觀點(diǎn)型，5段

P1

1 It is argued that space travel should be more and more popular in the future due to the possibility

2However，I disagree with this opinion.

3Instead, I think that the space travel should be limited

P2

1總理由之一 One reason of the oppositions bases the ground on the fact that it is too expensive for ordinary people to afford.

2 解釋 （為什么這么說）Thus ,it would turn into the privilege of the rich, which would broaden the gap between the rich and the poor.

3 遞進(jìn)furthermore, the safety of this extreme travel remains a question and it will be a risk for the human being .

4 If anything negative happen in outer space , how can the travellers be rescued?

５總 Due to such disadvantages, people often doubt the availability of this travel .

P3

1 總理由之二 ?Besides , space trip will impose ?negative impact on the environment.

2 例子 for instance, the emissions from the aircrafts will definitely pollute the air and result in unknown consequences

3 that is why many people state that we had better not exploit the space too much for the sake of protecting the only universe .

4 hence ,the voice of stopping this kind if trip has always been heard

P4 讓步段

It does not mean that we could never ever explore the space ,it just suggests that the trip into the space should not be encouraged .

P5

In conclusion ,only by respecting and protecting the space can we shape a long lasting universe for us and our next generation