Simon雅思寫作-大作文

（01）考試信息與技巧

課程目標：

1.了解任務要求是什么

2.學會將任務分成幾部分

3.對于不同的題型要有不同的寫作技巧

4.大量的進行練習

5.得到反饋有所進步

任務要求：

字數(shù)要求250字以上（建議在40分鐘內(nèi)完成）

寫作題目類型為常見生活類話題，主要分為四種類型題目

評分標準：

文章對任務的回應

文章的連貫性

文章的詞匯

文章的語法

文章結構：

開頭介紹段：約2句話，花費約5分鐘

主體段落：共2段，每段約5句話，每段花費約10分鐘

結論段：約1句話，花費約5分鐘

注意：寫作前一定要做計劃（約10分鐘）

（02）開頭描述

用兩句話介紹文章主題，并對寫作題目給出一個非?；\統(tǒng)的回應

寫作類型：

1.討論類

2.觀點類

3.解決問題類

4.兩部分類

案例分析

討論類

題目：

Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups, while others believe that it is better for them to study slone.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

開頭段改寫填空：

People have different views about the effectiveness of?group?study____________working alone. While there are some benefits to studying independently, I believe that group work is?usually more?_________.

觀點類

題目：

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

開頭段改寫填空：

It is sometimes argued that high school students should be made to do some work in?their?local communities. I completely agree that this?kind of?_____would be a good idea.

It is sometimes argued that high school students should be made to do some work in?their?local communities. In my opinion, it would be?wrong to??teenagers to do any kind?of ______work.

It is sometimes argued that high school students should be made to do some work in their local communities. While I disagree with the idea of making such programmes?compulsory,?I do?believe that?_______community service could benefit young?people.

解決問題類

題目：

Many criminals reoffend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

開頭段改寫填空：

It is true that punishments do?not?always?______criminals?_______?committing more?crimes.?There are various reasons why?offenders?repeatedly ___________, but governments could certainly take steps to address this?issue.

兩部分類

題目：

As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

開頭段改寫填空：

Work?plays?a?______?in our lives, and we would all like?to feel?_____?professionally.?While a variety of factors may lead to job satisfaction, it would be unrealistic to expect everyone to be happy at?work.

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參考答案：

討論類

as opposed to

productive

觀點類

scheme

force

unsalaried

voluntary

解決問題類

deter

from

break the law

兩部分類

central role

fulfilled

注意：開頭介紹段落不需要太長，花費5分鐘寫兩句話左右即可

（03）主體段

主體段有兩段，每段大約5句話（90-100字）

案例分析

題目：

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Firstly, Secondly, Finally類

適用于你有不止一個主意的時候，多用于優(yōu)缺點問題以及解決問題類

主體段參考案例：

There are several reasons why I would argue against having?compulsory community service?for secondary school students.?Firstly, the?school curriculum?is already full with important?academic subjects, such as maths, science and languages.?For example, I remember having an?extremely busy timetable?when I was at high school, and it would not have been possible to add to it.?Secondly,?students’ performance?in other subjects would be affected if?valuable study time?were taken by?charity work or neighbourhood improvement schemes.?Finally, I believe that teenage students would be?reluctant?to take part in any programme of?obligatory work, and this could lead to?poor motivation?and even bad behaviour.

Idea, Explain, Example類

適用于你只有一個具體想法的時候

On the other hand, the?opportunity?to do?voluntary community?service?could be extremely positive for high school students. By making?these?programmes?optional, schools would?ensure that only motivated students took part.?These young people?would?gain valuable experience?in an?adult working environment, which could help to?build?their?self confidence?and?enhance their skills. Having?such experience and skills?on their CVs could greatly improve?school leavers’ career prospects.?For example, a period of voluntary work experience might?impress a university admissions officer or a future employer.

注意：連接詞不能提高你的詞匯得分

（04）結論段

結論段千萬不要寫任何新的信息（前文沒有提到的）?。?！

只需要寫一句話，總結之前的內(nèi)容

寫作技巧：改寫你在開頭描述段給出的內(nèi)容

案例分析

討論類

題目：

In many cities the use?of?video?cameras?in public places is being increased in order?to?reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom.

Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?

開頭段改寫填空：

It is true?that?video?_______?has become commonplace in many cities in recent years.?While?I understand that critics may see this as an invasion of?privacy,?I believe that there are more benefits than?drawbacks.

結論段改寫填空：

In conclusion, I would argue that the advantages of?using video?_______?in?public?places do outweigh the disadvantages.

觀點類

題目：

Families who send their children to private schools should not?be required to pay?taxes that support the state education?system.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

開頭段改寫填空：

Some people believe that parents of children who attend private schools should?not?_____?to state schools through taxes. Personally, I completely disagree with?this?view.

結論段改寫填空：

In conclusion, I do not believe?that?any?__________?should be made for people?who?choose private education.

解決問題類

題目：

In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing.

What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be?taken?to?reduce?the impact of ageing?populations.

開頭段改寫填空：

It is true that people in industrialised nations can expect to live longer than ever before. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies can take?steps to?__________?these potential problems.

結論段改寫填空：

In conclusion, various measures can be?taken to?_____?the problems that are certain?to?arise as the populations of countries grow?older.

兩部分類

題目：

There are many different types of music in the world today.

Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

開頭段改寫填空：

It is true that a rich variety of musical styles can be found around the world. Music is a

_______?part of?all human?_______?for a range of reasons, and I would argue that traditional music is more important than modern, international?music.

結論段改寫填空：

In conclusion, music?is a?______?part?of?human?_______?, and I believe that traditional?music?should be given more importance than international?music.

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參考答案：

討論類

surveillance

security systems

觀點類

need to contribute

financial concessions

解決問題類

mitigate

tackle

兩部分類

vital

cultures

necessary

existence

（05）寫作規(guī)劃

寫作前一定要花大約10分鐘來進行規(guī)劃

規(guī)劃三步驟：

1.閱讀并理解題目（突出強調(diào)題目中的關鍵詞）

2.規(guī)劃文章結構

3.為兩個主要段落（第三、四段規(guī)劃內(nèi)容）

案例分析

題目：

Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

規(guī)劃：

1.開頭介紹

2.第一個主體段（獨自學習的好處）

concentrate better, no distractions, focus on the task, read books or artcles, study at own pace

3.第二個主體段（小組學習的好處）

more ideas, share knowledge, gather more information

4.結論

（06）觀點類作文

觀點類作文主要會以“Do you agree or disagree？”的形式出現(xiàn)

關鍵詞是“you”，是征求你的意見而不是其他人的意見，不要談論其他人的意見

案例分析

The money spent by governments on space programmes would be better spent on?vital public services such as schools and hospitals.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

范文

Governments in some countries spend large amounts of money on?space exploration programmes. I completely agree with the idea that these are a waste of money, and that the?funds should be allocated?to public services.

There are several reasons why space programmes should be abandoned. Firstly, it is extremely expensive to train scientists and other staff involved with space?missions, and?facilities and equipment also come at a huge cost?to the government. Secondly, these programmes do not benefit normal people in our daily lives; they are simply?vanity?projects?for politicians. Finally, many missions to space fail completely, and the smallest technological error?can cost astronauts their lives. The Challenger?space shuttle disaster?showed us that space?travel?is extremely dangerous, and in my opinion it is not worth the risk.

I believe that the money from space programmes should go to vital public services instead. It is much cheaper to train doctors, teachers, police and other?public service?workers than it is to train astronauts or the scientists and engineers who work on space exploration projects. Furthermore,?public servants?do jobs that have?a positive impact on every member of society. For example, we all use schools, hospitals and roads, and we all need the security that the police provide.?If governments reallocated?the money spent on space travel and?research, many thousands of people?could be lifted out of poverty?or?given a better quality of?life.

In conclusion, my view is that governments should spend money on services that benefit all members of society, and it is wrong to waste resources on projects that do not improve our everyday lives.

（07）討論類作文

案例分析

Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

范文

People have different views about whether children should be taught to be competitive or co-operative. While?a spirit of competition?can sometimes be useful in life, I believe that the ability to co-operate is more important.

On the one hand, competition can be?a great source of motivation?for children. When teachers use games or prizes to?introduce an element of competitiveness?into lessons, it can encourage children to work harder to?outdo the other pupils?in the class. This kind of?healthy rivalry?may help to?build children’s self confidence, while pushing them to work independently and progress more quickly. When these children leave school, their confidence and?determination?will help them in competitive situations such as job interviews. It can therefore be argued that competition should be encouraged in order to prepare children for adult life.

On the other hand, it is perhaps even more important to prepare children for the many?aspects of adult life?that require co-operation. In the workplace, adults are expected to work in teams, follow instructions given by their?superiors, or supervise and support the more?junior members of staff.?Team collaboration?skills?are much more useful than a competitive determination to win. This is the?attitude that I believe schools should foster?in young people. Instead of?promoting the idea?that people are either winners or losers, teachers could show children that they gain more from working together.

In conclusion, I can understand why people might want to encourage competitiveness in children, but it seems to me that?a co-operative attitude is much more desirable?in adult life.

（08）解決問題類作文

案例分析

In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this?

What solutions can you suggest?

范文

It is true that the behaviour of school pupils in some parts of the world has been getting worse in recent years. There are a variety of possible reasons for this, but?steps can definitely be taken to tackle the problem.

In my opinion,?three main factors are to blame?for the way young people behave at school nowadays. Firstly, modern?parents tend to be too lenient or permissive. Many?children become accustomed to?getting whatever they want, and they find it difficult to accept the demands of teachers or the?limits imposed on them?by school rules. Secondly, if teachers cannot control their students, there must be an issue with the?quality of classroom management?training or support within schools. Finally, children are influenced by the behaviour of?celebrities, many of whom?set the example?that success can be achieved without finishing school.

Student behaviour can certainly be improved. I believe that the change must start with parents, who need to be persuaded that it is important to?set firm rules?for their children. When children misbehave or break the rules, parents should use?reasonable punishments?to demonstrate that actions have consequences. Also, schools could?play an important role?in?training both teachers and parents to use?effective disciplinary techniques, and in improving the communication between both groups. At the same time, famous people, such as musicians and football players, need to understand the?responsibility that they have to act as role models?to children.

In conclusion, schools will continue to?face discipline problems?unless parents, teachers and public figures set clear rules and demonstrate the right behaviour themselves.

（09）兩部分類問題

案例分析

News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news, and would it be better if more good news was reported?

范文

It is true that editors have to make difficult decisions about which news stories they broadcast or publish, and their choices are no doubt influenced by a variety of factors. In my opinion, we are?exposed to too much bad news, and I would?welcome a greater emphasis on good news.

Editors face a range of considerations?when deciding what news stories to focus on. Firstly, I imagine that they have to consider whether viewers or readers will be interested enough to choose their television channel or their newspaper over competing providers. Secondly, news editors have a responsibility to inform the public about important events and issues, and they should therefore?prioritise stories that are in the public interest.

Finally,?editors are probably?under some pressure from the owners?who employ them.?For?example, a newspaper owner might have?particular political views?that he or she wants to promote.

It seems to me that people do become accustomed to negative news. We are exposed on a daily basis to stories about war, crime,?natural disasters and tragic human suffering?around the world. I believe that such repeated?exposure gradually desensitises people, and we become more?cynical?about the world and?more sceptical?that we can do anything to change it. I would prefer to see more positive news stories, such as reports of the work of medical staff after a natural disaster, or the kindness of volunteers who help in their communities. This kind of news might?inspire us all to lead better lives.

In conclusion, it must be extremely difficult for editors to choose which news stories to present, but I would like to see?a more positive approach?to this?vital public service.

（10）同意與不同意類問題拓展

案例解析

案例一

Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

解析

開頭描述：

Some hobbies are relatively easy, while others present more of a challenge. Personally, I believe that both types of hobby can be fun, and I therefore disagree with the statement that hobbies need to be difficult in order to be enjoyable.

主體段：

解釋為什么簡單的愛好可以是愉快的

解釋為什么困難的愛好可以變得有趣

結論段：

不同意“困難的愛好更好”這個觀點

案例二

Many people say that we now live in 'consumer societies' where money and possessions are given too much importance.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

解析

開頭描述：

It is true that many people criticise modern society because it seems to be too materialistic. I agree with this to some extent, but I do not think it is the case that everyone is a victim of consumer culture.

主體段：

我認為很多人確實過于關注金錢

還有許多人并不以金錢為導向

結論段：

部分同意這個觀點

案例三

In the last century, the first man to walk on the moon said it was 'a giant leap for mankind'. However, some people think it has made little difference to our daily lives.

To what extent do?you agree or disagree?

解析

開頭描述：

It is often argued that the act of sending a man to the moon has been of no benefit to normal people. While I agree that this is true in practical terms, I believe that the psychological impact of this great achievement should not be underestimated.

主體段：

對大多數(shù)人實際生活沒有任何好處

但這是一項鼓舞人心的成就

結論段：

部分同意這個觀點

（11）寫作(Task 2)總結

雅思大作文解題步驟：

1.熟讀題目，劃出題目中的關鍵詞

2.寫作規(guī)劃（非常重要?。。?/span>）

3.將文章分為四段來寫

開頭介紹

主體段

主體段

結論

雅思大作文主要題型：

1.觀點類作文

2.討論類作文

3.解決問題類作文

4.兩部分類作文

對于雅思大作文，良好的方法技巧固然非常重要，但光知道辦法沒用，還需要提高自身的英語基礎水平

復習技巧：

1.掌握基本的方法與技巧，知曉如何運用

2.提高英語基礎水平（可以通過書籍，電視劇，電影，報紙等）

3.多加練習，培養(yǎng)自己的解題模式