寫作四項(xiàng)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：1任務(wù)回應(yīng)度，2連貫流暢，3語(yǔ)法寬度和精準(zhǔn)度，4詞匯多樣性和精準(zhǔn)度

從句為主

改變主語(yǔ)

1 doing動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)。working as a teacher，educating children the importance of obeying rules and respecting others

2 抽象名詞短語(yǔ)做主語(yǔ) children's obsession with phone，young people's inability，poverty ，the popularity of working as a teacher，the willingness to choose a teaching career

把腦子里的形容詞或動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換成抽象名字