2021年5月24日雅思寫作大作文真題范文?

? ? 雅思大作文寫作題目 ：

? ? Children are face educational, social and commercial pressures. What are the causes of these pressures? What measures should be taken to reduce them??

? ? 范文解析 本題屬于教育類話題。重點(diǎn)爭論孩子面臨教育，社交和商業(yè)壓力的緣由和解決方法。該題型屬于說明文類別，考生在處理文章結(jié)構(gòu)時可以對應(yīng)問題內(nèi)容來設(shè)置主體段內(nèi)容。在思索論點(diǎn)方面，關(guān)于社交和商業(yè)壓力這兩方面的緣由可能稍難一些，尤其是對于“social”這個詞匯的理解。假如理解為“社會的”那么對應(yīng)的緣由就比較難以概括了。?

? ? 雅思大作文文章結(jié)構(gòu)?

? ? paragraph 1 :結(jié)合時代背景引入話題且寫出引導(dǎo)下文的連接句。?

? ? paragraph 2: 論述孩子面臨教育、社交和商業(yè)壓力的緣由。?

? ? paragraph 3: 論述對應(yīng)的解決方法。?

? ? paragraph 4: 總結(jié)題目中的現(xiàn)象和解決方法。?

? ? 雅思大作文寫作范文?

? ? In this time and age, it is conceivable that children bear heavy pressure from education, social life and commercial respect. This tendency involves several factors and I would elaborate on them as follows.?

? ? The most rooted one lies in the fiercer competition in the society. It is ubiquitous that the modern world is a one replete with competition. In an attempt to survive and attain success in future life, children are required to be accustomed to competing with peers in various situations, ranging from academic performance to personal skills. Besides, most parents place higher expectation on their children, urging them to study harder and diminishing their time on entertainment. Obviously, under such circumstance, excessive stress is imposed on children.?

? ? Another factor is that children should follow certain rules to be acceptable by others. Although sometimes they do not quite approve of perspectives or values of peers, they are not allowed to behave aggressively and even conceal their true feeling to maintain a stable and close friendship. In regard to the culprit of commercial pressure, intensive advertising campaigns should be blamed for. Toys and snacks are depicted attractive and tasty in TV commercials; consequently, it is difficult for children to resist the temptation and they tend to require parents to purchase those products. However, the fact is that the result is often contrary to their expectations.?

? ? In order to relieve children from high pressure, several effective measures are supposed to be adopted. First and foremost, children themselves had better to adjust their attitude towards exams or competition in schools. To be specific, composure and optimism are essential elements they should be equipped with when encountering challenges. In addition, parents’ encouragement and guidance rather than undue requirements serve the better purpose. Furthermore, government should play a regulatory role in advertising aimed at children, applying the power to censoring the content of commercials.?

? ? In conclusion, although it is regarded as a normal phenomenon in the wake of social development, children who are continuously under pressure are likely to suffer from mental diseases. Therefore, children, parents as well as the authority should make concerted efforts to address this issue.

--------------------------------------------------------

作者：芝士酒是力量

鏈接：https://wenku.baidu.com/view/7070f3514731b90d6c85ec3a87c24028915f85fa.html

來源：百度文庫

著作權(quán)歸作者所有。商業(yè)轉(zhuǎn)載請聯(lián)系作者獲得授權(quán)，非商業(yè)轉(zhuǎn)載請注明出處。